Firestar and Sandstorm

Avoid putting the shading around all the lineart. maybe have it to one side, if the light is up, then have the shadows at the bottom of the head and anything else. Then you could try and add some lighting. Maybe add a few trees to give it a more detailed background. i love the blur in the background! Add some grass showing over the characters feet, to make it more alive. It would have been nice to see a bit more emotion in Firestar. Everything else is fine! Keep up the great work. I hope this was the help you were looking for!